Thesis Statement

Hip Hop music started unpopular in other cultures, but technological advances such as internet and programs like YouTube spread it globally and change its artist’s perspective of the world.

Revision of my Annotated Bibliography

Concepcion, Mariel. "YOUTUBE." Article : 11 pars. Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2013. <http://web.ebscohost.com.libserv-prd.bridgew.edu/ehost/detail?sid=c14dfaff-5154-4148-8e89-e057ef6e38d3%40sessionmgr110&vid=1&hid=117&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=aph&AN=34439381>.

This source is an article from our school databases. It discusses the advantage of marketing music by posting videos on YouTube website. It describes some examples of Hip Hop artists that became famous by making videos available on YouTube. This source is reliable because it is from our school databases; it is not like Wikipedia that anyone has an access to post whatever they know. The article also has references at the bottom of the page, to show the places where the author found those information. I will use this source as a way to support my thesis statement. To show that internet and programs such as YouTube also helped hip hop music to spread globally.

Annotated Bibliography

Concepcion, Mariel. "YOUTUBE." Article : 11 pars. Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2013. <http://web.ebscohost.com.libserv-prd.bridgew.edu/ehost/detail?sid=c14dfaff-5154-4148-8e89-e057ef6e38d3%40sessionmgr110&vid=1&hid=117&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#db=aph&AN=34439381>.

This source is an article from our school databases. It discusses the advantage of marketing music by posting videos on YouTube website. It describes some examples of Hip Hop artists that became famous by making videos available on YouTube.

This source is reliable because it is from our school databases, it is not like Wikipedia that anyone can go and post whatever they know. The article also has references at the bottom of the page, to show the places where the author found those information.

I will use this source and among others, as a way to support my argument to the audience.